When it’s so painful yet it does not hurt
When the fall is so great but the feet still run
Smiles express tears
The mouth can’t let words out of him so words wander in the mind, hitting themselves against each other causing the mind to loose her interest to fight back then the mouth just smiles in comfort.
For there’s war in the mind because he won’t just let words out.
Smart heart, she shuts her gates before mind comes to complain
She’s had enough of the pity.
Arms folded, she joins the face to smile for there’s more comfort and hope.
The mind will lay to rest soon after the war with words.
Contagious, mouths smile and the heart cheer
Soon the mind will be infected.
Then words will sing themselves out in encouragement
Oh the mouth will laugh out smiles the heart will join in the merry.
Then where will misery be?
The mouth didn’t speak of him,
the mind won the war without fighting
Sweet little heart didn’t give a damn
It will be painful but it won’t hurt
The fall will be great but the feet are still going to run.
Deep
Thanks
Wow
Stupendous
Perfect diction
Medaaze obaa.
Nice
Heya dear, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the visit
Wow…. Nice word play
Thanks dear. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the visit
Seriously Korkor, you have such a mind for depth of poetry. You keep your reader smiling in delight and wonder.
You’re a gem; honestly.
Keep on being poetic.
Thanks. I’m humbled and encouraged. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the visit
Always my friend.
you’re killing it… very deep indeed
Thanks dear. I’m glad you enjoyed it
Exquisite
Thanks for the read.
I under rated you Missy Kay.
Hahaha, glad you enjoyed it Barbs
Masterpieces
Well done
Thank you
…Still thinking the mouth won the war without letting the teeth bite the words… #BEARDNATION
#NICEPOEM
am.soo in love with this piece. nice work baby girl and more grease on your elbow♡♡♡
Your diction and knowledge of poetry is beautiful to read as it leaves smiles lingering on and on.
Thanks Elvis, I’m humbled
Word play be what h3333. Korkor Adjoa FOREVER.
Haha, thanks
Word play be what h3333. Korkor Adjoa FOREVER.
This is an amazing piece…😊😊
Thanks
Will keep revisiting